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Every Other Line
by jhavard at 5/1/2009 10:51:18 PM


Ok, so I wrote this a while back. You can read every other line or you can just read it normally and it will still make sense. I think this is a new form of writing.

1a.It's all your fault, you know
1b.There's no one else
2a.You're the reason I can't sleep
2b.I think of you.

3a.As we lye here
3b.We're in this bed
4a.In our room
4b.It's just too soon
5a.At 5:30a.m.

5b.You turn your' head
6a.I see your' face
6b.You say I love you
7a.I hear your' voice
7b.You press against me
8a.I feel your' body
8b.You touch my face
9a.I feel your' breath
9b.You kiss my cheek
0a.I turn my head
0b.We fall asleep.


Comments
hayleemarcou



5/14/2009 11:44:11 AM

that is soooo sweet i love it