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rate my song lyrics
by nickbporter at 5/26/2009 10:16:15 PM


I just wrote a song. Sitting here some how I started thinking about my ex and well you know what that can lead too. so took get out my emo's I wrote this song please be critical and give me some feedback. I love critisism.


"Never love again"
I saw you yesterday, with whats his face.
It seems like we were never in love at all.

And I had shit to say, but you just turned away
How many times can one heart break.

Because I believed, every word you said
this mans heart is never gonna mend
and I swear....I'll never love again

I swear that I will never love again

i know its been awhile,but I still see your smile
in every girl i pass by on the street

and none of them are you, but they ask me to choose
how can I explain im still in love with you

because I meant, every word I said
This mans heart will love you to the end
and I swear.....Ill never love again

I swear that I will never love again


Comments
marci_89



5/27/2009 11:04:06 AM

lol that is good
bree422



5/30/2009 9:10:21 PM

"I still see your smile in every girl i pass by on the street" is fantastic. I want to hear what this sounds like when its put to music.