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the unfinished dream
by ladychocolatier at 5/30/2009 5:36:57 PM


I am standing by the window gazing at such a lovely scene
So beautiful and quiet it is outside this eve, so picturesque so serene
Suddenly I feel lonely and wish you near my side
I quietly call to you so as not to disturb the peaceful silence of the countryside

You come and stand beside me and yet, tis not close enough
I wrap your arms around me placing your hands upon my stomach
I snuggle closer to you, laying my head in the crook of your arm
Feeling so safe, so comfortable and ever so warm

We look out together agreeing on the beautiful sight
Just holding each other and enjoying our delight
Of being together this day and cherishing our time
Sharing all the trifles and thoughts of our contented minds

Lovingly you bend down and gently kiss me upon my neck
A single silent sigh escapes me so quietly upon my breath
Holding your hand in mine, I raise it to my lips
And tenderly place a single gentle kiss upon each fingertip

I hear your heart beat pulsing with mine
Our loving passion seems to stop all time
Slowly, feeling with your hand, the bottom of my shirt you do find
And moving upwards softy caressing upon my bare side

Slowly I turn within your loving embrace
To see your beautiful eyes upon your softly smiling face
Looking so deeply into your entrancing eyes
Makes my heart soar and my spirit rise

So warm and tender is your touch upon my waist
Then, oh so delicately you lift my shirt from me without haste
Carefully you kneel before me cupping my breast
Sensual whispered kisses you place upon my chest

Pulling me closer you gently lift me from my place
Holding me tightly and securely in your strong embrace
Carrying me to the bedroom, setting me upon our bed
Your passions and intent so ardently expressed without a single word said

And so you begin to lay beside me but alas a sudden noise
Has broken the splendor of our anticipated lovemaking joys
We look to each other for the reason and within my sight you disappear
Suddenly I realize you are not so pleasantly near

For tis morning and to my horror my life firmly resets itself
To find my bed empty and once again alone, laying by myself
So sad and blue I become... just crying quietly in my room
Feeling the day's obligations intently set upon my impending doom


Comments
sale1970



5/30/2009 5:48:41 PM

Wow Lady C that was Outstanding,Real good job,but I think you need continue,can't wait to hear what Happened next,and where those hands might finish,nobody know's except you.That was Amazing,I Love it.
smartchoice1



5/30/2009 7:33:32 PM

WOW THAT WAS AWESOME LADYC,GOOD JOB VERY NICE INDEED.

chat_girl
5/30/2009 10:39:24 PM

Hey Girl I have had the same dreams!! But beautifully written reminds me of a romantic love story I read.. Yea not sure it was a good idea Gets the ummm oh never Mind!!
heatuup



5/31/2009 3:13:42 AM

Very, very nice

ladychocolatier
6/4/2009 8:50:53 PM

Thank You Everyone!!! Love the Feedback! Makes me think I can really write! LoL!

lipchick_______
8/23/2009 11:58:31 PM

ok... I am going to bed now....(damn I hope I have those kinda dreams when I close MY eyes tonight...lol) Great Job Jen!!

nostringatall
8/26/2009 9:00:50 PM

That was Beautiful!!! WOW!!! If only we all could live that dream without that ending, but for it to be reality! Now I want to know who that significant other is in your dream?
niceguyiam



9/1/2009 9:52:25 AM

You have a real gift. Wow!