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Wall Around Your Heart
by indianpolak at 8/22/2009 11:58:50 AM


It starts at a place, where two people face,
Each other, merely by chance.
Abandoned by words and the purpose they serve,
Stops them right in their tracks.

How long has it been, since this feeling within
Has made you the cat who you are?

It let's you believe, once more in the moon.
It let's you have Faith, again in the stars.
And it let's you go free, cause someone broke through
The Wall Around Your Heart.

Now the world is unkind,most of the time,
But most of the time we survive.
The hard luck and losses,love's double-crosses
That all broken hearts seem to find.
After giving too much,they're afraid of a touch,
Cause the last time it just left a scar.

And now you believe,once more in the moon.
And now you have Faith,again in the stars.
And now you go free,cause someone broke through,
The Wall Around Your Heart.

There's walls made of steel.
There's walls made of stone.
There's walls made of fear,alone.

But sooner or later,it's all human nature
Propelling you forward,again.
It's like a step from a dance,a turn and a glance
Asking "where in the world have you been?"

And now you don't have to answer,
Cause now you're a dancer,
And the music is ready to start.

And you can believe, once more in the moon.
And you can have faith, again in the stars.
And you can go free,cause someone broke through
The Wall Around Your Heart.


Comments

catsmam76
8/22/2009 12:10:07 PM

I feel that darn speechless thing comming on again......cats

indianpolak
8/22/2009 12:15:08 PM

Again???...The Cats, speechless???........

catsmam76
8/22/2009 12:16:19 PM


rosesandsmiles
8/22/2009 3:02:30 PM

I'm speechless to, but that was a beautiful poem.

indianpolak
8/22/2009 3:48:42 PM

Ty roseand smiles...The "Speechless" blog,written this am by our own Cats, was the inpsiration,for this post.....Cats...TY.....Indian...

catsmam76
8/22/2009 5:04:56 PM

Awwww shucks it weren't nothin...yalll...

kinfire_rain
8/22/2009 6:13:07 PM

very nice heartfelt poem. Could be for anyone out there, but Cats we all know its for you. You deserve the best and Indian is showing it to you.

catsmam76
8/22/2009 6:16:06 PM

The Cats is most humbly aware of what the lady is showing him.........And immensely pleased with the situation
alabamabelle31



8/22/2009 7:22:30 PM

That was very beautiful Idian and very sweet. Glad to see you have joined our little group here.

indianpolak
8/22/2009 7:40:12 PM

Ty alabama....I've been around here, just don't always put my .02 in........

bigmamano7
8/22/2009 7:51:57 PM

cat speechless,, Vicki

catsmam76
8/23/2009 9:16:19 AM

On a regular basis no less.......

angelic_magic
8/23/2009 11:23:42 AM

What beautiful words Indian!! I could feel your heartfelt emotions in every line! Thank you so much for sharing this!! I remember when my son was telling me it was over between him and the girl he loved..that nothing would work...he didn't know how to reach her... I said don't give up.... love is like beating your head against a wall either you knock down the bricks or you get a head ache and walk away. He married that girl 6 yrs ago...

indianpolak
8/23/2009 11:35:12 AM

Thank you!! angelic...It does take time, perseverance and a special person, to make us realise what possiblities awaits beyond those walls. ...Indian...
alabamabelle31



8/23/2009 12:40:54 PM

It is very hard to let down those walls when you've been hurt so much in the past by people but like has been said it takes time to let someone in. Beautiful words and something to think about definitly.
hellonwheels52



8/24/2009 5:31:17 AM

Extremely beautiful and heart-felt.....I could feel the emotion from here, and that's a rare thing. Usually when the wall is breached, it's in the most unanticipated and unexpected way. But it's always a beautiful and moving thing when it happens. Congratulations and I hope the hole is large enough and stays open long enough to let more happiness in. I can see you smiling from here.....

needaffection
8/24/2009 11:20:01 PM

That was very, very good. A+ for prose, A+ for poetry.

toughtoo
9/24/2009 11:17:51 AM

The wall around my heart all though made of; steel fear and stone. She made it to the throne and now I'll never be alone, with my throbing b*** I hope she doesn't leave me for this one.....