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by rabbitbrown at 9/11/2009 9:01:51 PM


I have these dreams I can't shake
And memories I know I haven't lived
Yet with you
How are these a part of me still

Here, beneath the veils of waking scenes
A story I feel within my veins
Living continuously
And undisturbed by the years in my wake

Not a shadow anymore
Are you
Not a figment of my imaginary spheres
There drifting in and out of my thoughts
You are here

How do I move aside foundations
I spent so long constructing
Around this story
How does the reality set in

Where is the lanturn I once held
Far above the landscape of the world
As I now peer through my insecurities and wonder
How do I change into my own skin

Not a stranger beside me in the mirror of dreams
are you - no ghostly companion
Not a figure cloaked in mystery I can't win
Alive only where my hopes pursued

No intangible presence I drew from make believe
Are you
Stepping forth from these things
Standing in the glow of this time and place
Here...


Comments

polefrog
9/11/2009 9:28:12 PM

Oh, You are good!

mmilesg
9/11/2009 11:24:07 PM

Awesome write!

venussmiles
9/12/2009 5:11:34 AM

Beautiful prose. Thanks for sharing.

catsmam76
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9/12/2009 6:22:20 AM

A beautiful read.....

ttex1969
9/12/2009 12:04:07 PM

I think I understand this one a little better than some of the other poems. In any case keep working on them. In the end you would make a better poet than I!

yetismom
9/12/2009 7:41:34 PM

ttex, you almost made this girl cry. I can't believe it - someone who knew to use "I" instead of "me" at the end of the sentence. Seriously, no one EVER gets that right!

jennyann71
9/12/2009 8:10:25 PM

Thank you for the insight of your soul

yetismom
9/12/2009 8:24:48 PM

I just read this for the fifth time - it's truly moving. Thank for sharing your thoughts with us.

alrose
9/13/2009 1:29:03 AM

Very moving!

rabbitbrown
9/13/2009 8:40:20 PM

Wow, thank you so much. You're comments are very encouraging and absolutely appreciated. Blessings to you.