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by rabbitbrown at 11/3/2009 6:02:20 PM


Didn't I say
I wasn't sure it was going to last
Yesterday

Didn't I point out
All the mistakes that would ensue
Or was that you

When we said it was give and take
Did we look the other way
I could have sworn it mattered
At least, I know it does today

Didn't you mention
Everything worth having is worth the fight
Of stepping in

Didn't you begin
To trust the waters beneath would become serene
Or was that me

When we said it was worth the wait
Did we only go our separate ways
What's here is gone tomorrow
Or at least inconspicuously misplaced

Didn't I try
To put a face to those shadows
When they only offered up denial

Didn't I take the time

Then

Didn't I accept
That the outlook was too bleak to be of use
That there was nothing left in view
Or was that you...


Comments

claudius5
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11/6/2009 2:40:21 AM

Very nice and projects much imagery and does involve the thought process. I have read it several times and each time I come away with something else I have discovered in the words. Thanks for sharing.