springfever100
Nepean, ON
age: 41
| just testing the waters here lol so be very critical with me and what I should do or not on my profile , though I think I have it pretty good with numerous tweakings but no real feedback
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springfever100
Nepean, ON
age: 41
| bumping my posting up since no one wrote lol
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italianlady05
Omaha, NE
age: 53 online now!
| ok..i will respond! I pretty much read all of your profile info...whew..a little long for me but made it through most of it. That doesn't mean it was bad just that i tend to stop reading and start skimming when it gets too long. JMO...and one more thing, i applaud you for having a pic up but one suggestion...can you put one up showing your face more and smiling? That's a better way to see someone..otherwise i give you a B+ or even an A-....does that help any?
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springfever100
Nepean, ON
age: 41
| thanks for feedback, okay I'll narrow it down , and make it shorter, and try to streamline it further etc
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italianlady05
Omaha, NE
age: 53 online now!
| no you can leave it that's just my take on it ! what do i know anyway?
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serenity16
Petal, MS
age: 41
| italianlady05 is right. you should put a pic of you looking up.
other than that I think oyu had a lot of great info. I for one would to hear more about you.
serenity16
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808_sm
Honolulu, HI
age: 40
| Your photo is not appealing. Sitting on a couch in front of a computer has got to be a really boring photo for any woman to see. Then to top it off you state you like staying indoors. I am guessing there a lot of women who probably stop reading because you started off sounding a lot like their ex.
You essay is so vague. It is like you are trying to please everyone. You like staying indoor, but yet you like outdoor activities. You dress casual, but hard at times.
Just state the positives about yourself and let the women get to know the negatives. What you think is a negative trait, a women might find it appealing, but if you state it as a negative than it is a negative.
I always think the best photos are the photos where are actually doing what you say you like. It showing action speaks louder than words. Anyone can say they do this and they do that, but actually having a photograph of them doing it is a lot more powerful.
Leave out the getting healthy comments and about perfect weight. Just state you are health conjience. Let the photo(s) show how much in shape you are. Would you enjoy reading a woman profile stating she is a perfect 120lbs. What your first impression. Stuck up? Egostitics...ect
Not trying to harsh....just trying to give you another way of looking at your profile. To make a stronger presentation. As of now it is average.
Keep in mind. Your profile sole purpose is to make an first impression. Don't give out too much information to prevent women from wanting to get to know you. Plus you want women to ask questions. If you answer all their questions in your essay, then they have no reason to write.
Just a thought.
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springfever100
Nepean, ON
age: 41
| 808_sm, thanks, I can see what you mean now, I'll start a rewrite and omit and accent some stuff on there etc, and change out the pics , see, without feedback from you guys its hard from my point of view to see what's wrong as I wrote it and thought it was good lol
edit note,. Okay I took a lot of non relevant info out, it's a start anyway
[Edited 6/23/2008 9:00:21 PM]
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