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3/13/2009 9:58:18 PM	how does this profile sound?
raymond55 Hayward, CA age: 54	any feed back is appreciated
3/13/2009 10:07:30 PM	how does this profile sound?
beverduster Chandler, OK age: 64
3/13/2009 11:18:10 PM	how does this profile sound?
stroker4u Leesburg, FL age: 48
3/14/2009 1:01:25 AM	how does this profile sound?
spider_man5 Westfield, MA age: 45	paragraph what you like to do and what your searching for then post to be noticed
3/14/2009 5:40:26 AM	how does this profile sound?
jo_mee Waco, TX age: 38	I agree with Spider Man... paragraphing your information would be better... other than that you are good to go!
3/14/2009 6:36:50 AM	how does this profile sound?
honeypoo123 Eastpointe, MI age: 59
3/16/2009 1:43:16 PM	how does this profile sound?
califgirl1 Martinsville, VA age: 63	I would leave out the part about being told many times you are a good lover...not cool...you failed to mention in there about what you are looking for...