| 6/5/2009 8:54:06 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | | 
sowen
Green Bay, WI
age: 43
| Hi,
Thanks for taking the time to read this. I am looking for brutaly honest feedback on my profile. You wont hurt my feelings...anything is game...fire away...
Thanks in advance
Steve
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| 6/5/2009 10:25:12 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
bombdiggity22
Palmer, MA
age: 47
| You say to much in your profile, no womans going to take the time to read all that, keep it simple and to the point, I would have also choosen the third pix in the dark shirt for your main pix and add some color to your profile.
JMO Romie 
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| 6/6/2009 8:31:16 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
sssasssafrasss
Green Bay, WI
age: 42
| Hi Steve! I think your profile is very good but I do agree with Bomb a bit. There is a fine line...some write too little but maybe you have a little too much. I guess I would look at it like this...the longer the list of what you are looking for and what you want, the more likely you are to have things in there that exclude potentials.
I personally think you're adorable and looked at your profile a long time ago! What intimidated me a bit was all of the travel you mention...and I am a HUGE fan of travel but, in this economy, a yearly vacation and a bunch of weekend trips scattered through the year is about all most people, including myself, can swing. You sound like a jet setter and maybe women with less means might be intimidated and a bit envious that they couldn't join you on all of these wonderful trips  Also, I think you have to keep in mind that most women in the age bracket you are looking at, still have children at home. This shouldn't hinder travel plans however, we aren't typically planning trips to Broadway or Vegas. We're more apt to take a cruise, go camping for a weekend, or simply take a day trip somewhere fun. I think your profile covers travel plans that are geared a little more toward those of a couple and as great as those are, they can't all be romantic getaways.
Hope this lends you some insight!
[Edited 6/6/2009 8:34:08 PM PST]
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| 6/12/2009 8:37:59 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
kerrylyn
Mountain, WI
age: 46
| Hi...you asked for help on your profile, like every one else says...to much infor tends to seem like a "used car sales pitch" the first paragragh is perfect and all that's really needed to get someone thinking....hmmmm..nice...maybe ? You coul, if you must, say one thing about what you like about getting your emotional needs met, then say something about what you would like in terms of an intimate or erotic (slightly...not too much info) evening or day w/ someone you care for...if u want example write me and I will help you ! My user name is kerrylyn. Also, and this is important, take your wages off !!! It attracts women who want to use u for your income and its not a real piece of info that matters to such a great extent that anyone that's real would truly say..."That income is great, I will mail him...!!!" Its too private. Good luck and if u need anything drop a line ! That's rather brave to ask for help...I love it ! Kerry lyn
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| 6/12/2009 8:45:00 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
catsmam76
Wisconsin Rapids, WI
age: 51
| looks like a good start to me. hang out check out other profiles and jump on in to the forums and such. thenafter a week or so look over your profile again and see what you think...good luck...the catsman
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| 6/12/2009 9:53:03 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
annaorange
Hamburg, NY
age: 44
| Just a review, new to this myself. 1st most women are as stated already, still active parents. You never mention anyone your family, friends, kids no real life. Of course I read it quick because it is a real pitch and a tad long. I came away feeling like you are looking for a very active women who has no kids, little other commitments in life.
Please don't take this wrong, you asked but most women here( not I ,I am widowed) have an ex somewhere. I would ASSUME they read this as the typical ex...lots of cash, no committments, all the time in the world to do what he wants.I say sell yourself and your stuff less. Give a line or two of you, things important to you. One last thing, seperated. Give a little note as to your status. I can't think of a lady interested in someone whos newly seperated, or too long seperated. Good luck in this crazy game!
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| 6/13/2009 5:58:04 PM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
beverduster
Chandler, OK
age: 64 online now!
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| 7/3/2009 7:18:39 AM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
sifurich
Appleton, WI
age: 55
| Hi...you asked for help on your profile, like every one else says...to much infor tends to seem like a "used car sales pitch" the first paragragh is perfect and all that's really needed to get someone thinking....hmmmm..nice...maybe ? You coul, if you must, say one thing about what you like about getting your emotional needs met, then say something about what you would like in terms of an intimate or erotic (slightly...not too much info) evening or day w/ someone you care for...if u want example write me and I will help you ! My user name is kerrylyn. Also, and this is important, take your wages off !!! It attracts women who want to use u for your income and its not a real piece of info that matters to such a great extent that anyone that's real would truly say..."That income is great, I will mail him...!!!" Its too private. Good luck and if u need anything drop a line ! That's rather brave to ask for help...I love it ! Kerry lyn
Now this persons advice is good but at the same time you have to be a bit open about what others intentions are as well. Being a game player liars and so forth are common. There is one right here who does that. The bottom line is you have to use common sense and heart not be a user or a self server
[Edited 7/3/2009 7:19:54 AM PST]
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| 7/3/2009 7:20:29 AM | HELP!! Please read my profile and let me know how to improve | |
normalluv
Berea, KY
age: 44
| It's hard to rate or respond to a profile that's been set to private.
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