sweetgurly
Oak Ridge, TN
age: 35
|  check out my page I'm new here
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mrnyceguy
Glen Allen, VA
age: 37
| i liked blingie and Ilike you  
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emt854
Appleton, WI
age: 53
| I love your page but the background is annoying..
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boricualady
Williamson, GA
age: 40
| Whoa that background!! Lose it!! It's so distracting and annoying I had to FORCE myself to read your profile so I could give you the review you want. I have my own web site regarding the blue and liver recessive color genes in the German Shepherd Dog breed and at first I had this really cool background, it was black with blue lightening strikes and was animated. However when I went back years later to totally update the site I completely changed it and made the background a nice textured light blue.... which reminds me.... I think I'm going to change the background on my profile to a cute light pink wallpaper I have. LOL
You need to add an "S" at the end of "he has to have kid". Either that or put an "a" before the word kid. And maybe lose the "trying to stay away from Pork thing", it doesn't sound that attractive and is probably TMI. LOL
I would lose one or more of your references to guys having kids, you mention it several times, once is enough. Try to fill your profile more about the positive things you want rather than with rules of what you don't want. Men may see this as being much to strict and negative. You look like a very sweet lady and you have a pretty smile. Show them how beautiful you are inside by listing some of the beautiful things about you.
Instead of saying "young men need not apply" try saying something like, "Mature men who are closer to my age group are who I am interested in meeting" or similar.
You are a mature woman (like myself) and as such have been shaped by the road we call life. Let that wisdom come shining through in your profile in a positive manner.
Good luck with your search!!!
~Darlene~
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