| 1/9/2008 6:16:01 PM | My song, need opinion | | 
plowboyboots
Bon Aqua, TN
age: 22
| hey moon, brutha that sounded good. 
| | 1/9/2008 6:16:01 PM | My song, need opinion | | 
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| lol i've always been told taht dreams are for those who are too weak to have a reality
EDIT: but everyone who's posted so far, =^-^= you have no idea how much your opinions of the lyrics mean to me.
[Edited 1/9/2008 6:16:52 PM]
| | 1/9/2008 6:17:21 PM | My song, need opinion | |
plowboyboots
Bon Aqua, TN
age: 22
| that will make a great song, hope to here ya and that song on the radio, brutha
| | 1/9/2008 6:18:06 PM | My song, need opinion | | 
bocky1019
Newark, DE
age: 50
| you are a poet and didnt even know it
lyrics are original material but its the melody that makes a song..I,d say make it soft pop or gothic metal..not a good country tune
| | 1/9/2008 6:18:25 PM | My song, need opinion | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| lol, the song you'll probably hear, but me? lol i've not really sang for public in 6 years, i doubt i still have it
lol bocky, i've actually thought of that as well, gothic metal and rock being the main genre's i listen to, that and symphony lol, but thats for thinking the last one
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| | 1/9/2008 6:19:00 PM | My song, need opinion | |
plowboyboots
Bon Aqua, TN
age: 22
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| | 1/9/2008 6:19:37 PM | My song, need opinion | |
plowboyboots
Bon Aqua, TN
age: 22
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| | 1/9/2008 6:20:51 PM | My song, need opinion | | 
rer
Kennesaw, GA
age: 59
| Moon, second verse, change dummy to some other phrase. 4th verse, I am a daddy , but she is lying there in your arms. Change to My arms. keeps it in the same tense. Great song!
| | 1/9/2008 6:21:04 PM | My song, need opinion | | 
klassykitten
Toccoa, GA
age: 51
| Very good...I like it...Now i'm sitting here trying to put a tune to it...I think it has possibilities in several different slots
| | 1/9/2008 6:22:57 PM | My song, need opinion | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| lol rer, thanks for that, lol to be honest i've yet to really touch up on the song, it was a "wake up in the middle of the night and jot down" kind of thing, was too tired at that point to really work on it, lol thats part two of having put it up, to see if it needs changing and what not.
EDIT: and ty kitten =^-^=
EDIT2: lol rer, top of my head for "I'm such a dummy", only thing i can think of without really any thought put into it would be "I am so sorry". lol i'm wanting to have a shred of a rhyme scheme throughout it, so lol trying to keep things within the verses the same. lol and "she laid there in your arms," lol meaning that the baby is in the woman's arms, not mine lol
[Edited 1/9/2008 6:26:50 PM]
| | 1/9/2008 6:30:34 PM | My song, need opinion | | 
reenie4
Milwaukee, WI
age: 51
| Billy Joel was inspired by the song "River of Dreams" came to him in the middle of the night.... 
| | 1/9/2008 6:39:20 PM | My song, need opinion | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| oh really? lol i completely forgot about that reenie =^-^=
| | 1/9/2008 6:40:24 PM | My song, need opinion | |
plowboyboots
Bon Aqua, TN
age: 22
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| | 1/9/2008 6:41:37 PM | My song, need opinion | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| lol plowboy, dont be afraid to speak heheh
| | 1/9/2008 6:42:23 PM | My song, need opinion | |
reenie4
Milwaukee, WI
age: 51
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