| 1/11/2008 10:29:21 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
sugarcream
Wilmington, OH
age: 38
|  bout time !!!
kisses*
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| 1/11/2008 10:30:37 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| =^-^=
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| 1/11/2008 11:00:27 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
smileingheart
Bellingham, WA
age: 41
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| 1/11/2008 11:01:01 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| lol.....smileing, you didnt see anything o.o i did nothing!!!! lol
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| 1/12/2008 1:43:46 AM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
kelatious
Lubbock, TX
age: 38
| moonracer,
Just keep on writing, no matter what anyone else thinks. You've got talent. It was a good poem, but I checked "my ears are bleeding" just to screw with ya.
kel
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| 1/12/2008 9:46:54 AM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
haninra
Salt Lake City, UT
age: 36
| I like your choices in here
Poetry is really an expression of what one feels, and as such will not appeal or look right to everyone.
Any good artist no matter the medium eventualy figures out you just get the job done and dont fuss too much on making it perfect as this will often ruin the project all together.
I do like this poem.
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| 1/12/2008 10:01:13 AM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
italianlady05
Omaha, NE
age: 53
| good poem, moon!
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| 1/12/2008 10:37:25 AM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| lol =^-^= well then, published i think it will be, anyone have a clue as to how i can get it published?
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| 1/13/2008 5:58:30 AM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| nvm, i found out how to have it published. I will be writing a whole new flurry of poems, each will be posted on here for approval or disapproval. after which, i will have it made into a book, and i'll even send a few copies of them to some of yall on DH =^-^=. autographed, of course
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| 1/13/2008 3:32:47 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
nashoba_miko
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 39
| Wow....that was definately cool. Wish I had talent like that. My daughter writes stuff...but is soooooooooo dark.....good.......but DARK....urs isnt so dark Moon..again...very nice job.
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| 1/13/2008 3:34:32 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
moonracer
Baker, LA
age: 21
| oh, lol trust me, i have my dark poems
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| 1/13/2008 3:38:18 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
nashoba_miko
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 39
| I figured you did. Maybe need to get a group together for all you dark children. They can be beautiful....I'm sure it helps to get the words/thoughts on paper. I know it helps her. Sad, but beautiful.
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| 1/20/2008 5:18:55 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
kaylakay07
Fremont, NE
age: 19
| I absolutely loved it!!!!!
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| 1/20/2008 7:31:10 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
pops58
Crawfordsville, IN
age: 50
| u just keep doing what u do
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| 1/20/2008 8:36:46 PM | My first ever poem, what do you think? | |
happygirl1620
Hemet, CA
age: 46
| Dude to cool  
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