| 1/30/2008 9:20:15 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
pinky86
Sherman, TX
age: 22 online now!
|  i want to write a poem for the girl i like but i dont know what to write about for a poem can yall please give me some ideas PLEASE
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| 1/30/2008 9:25:45 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
ashiegirl
Riverside, IL
age: 19
| omg your from sherman tx????? omg are you serious? did you go to sherman high???
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| 1/30/2008 9:27:55 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
stephentrue
Ladera Ranch, CA
age: 59
| Try this. . .
A Love Like No Other
I never felt a love
Like this before
It's a love like no other
Something I have always hoped for
A love with friendship
Humour and heart
A bond so strong
It would never part
A love that makes you smile
From ear to ear
A love that is joyful
Without any fear
A love that is beautiful
From the inside out
A love with no tears,
Pain, or doubt
A love with soul
So tender and true
A love that I have found
Only in you...
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| 1/30/2008 9:30:40 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
pinky86
Sherman, TX
age: 22 online now!
| no i didnt go to SHS but i do live in sherman so any ideas please
useing the word 'love' is a little stong right now i need something more toned down
[Edited 1/30/2008 9:31:25 PM]
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| 1/30/2008 9:47:25 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
pinky86
Sherman, TX
age: 22 online now!
| man i am here for some advice not rude comments 
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| 1/30/2008 9:57:43 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
mindyb
Park Rapids, MN
age: 43
| look at your email
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| 1/30/2008 11:40:48 PM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
jbsd78
San Diego, CA
age: 30
| If this doesn't inspire you, I can't help.
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| 1/31/2008 1:09:22 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
pointy
Houston, TX
age: 39
| hows this bro?
as i look apon your passionate face.
it's your eyes that tell your untold grace.
my heart would cry a silent cry.
just to dance in your garden with you under a
moon lit sky.
what do you think?
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| 1/31/2008 2:45:56 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
cmjanew
Sayre, PA
age: 48
| How about:
There once was a boy from Sherman
No, his name was not Herman
He had no clue
So he went to school
To get help with writing from the heart
Few though would give him a start
He tried DateHookup, and Cupid
Some thought the idea was stupid
At least if the poem doesn't win her
He'll be subscribed for the future
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| 1/31/2008 4:37:02 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
garnetlady
Cincinnati, OH
age: 48
| Now the young man asked for advice, why be rude? The poems submitted were beautiful...
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| 1/31/2008 4:55:36 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
jayinfreo
Western Australia
Australia
age: 57
| Think of the things you most like about her & work from there
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| 1/31/2008 6:53:15 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
gonesailingbabe
Des Moines, IA
age: 45
| You know if you've never written a poem, try instead of borrowing someone else's love, TRY writing a letter to her...
Just sit and think of her
then WRITE what you thought...
How her smile makes your stomach feel
how her eyes sparkle when they look at you
how alone you feel as she walks away...
That will mean more to her than ANY thing else.
Write neatly (lol!) Sorry, I'm a mom
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| 1/31/2008 7:02:46 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
pleasantfun
Portage, MI
age: 46
| YOU WITHOUT ME
Oh what can it be
When I see you without me
The uneasiness of it all
And wrestling with my heart
Of being alone till death do me part.
O how can it be you without me
Wandering this earth aching
For love and tenderness that has
Seemed to allude me. O help me
Please find the passion and serenity
That has escaped me.
O why can you be without me
I am so aching and yearning for you
These feelings of apathy must escape me
For there has to be someone out there
That can remove this emptiness within
My heart and complete me.
O where are you without me
As I continue to seek the love of my life
You walk across my mind so tenderly
Haunting me, teasing me, and avoiding me
Playing with my heart so unknowingly
O where are you without me
O who are you without me
As I awaken another day seeking you
Maybe someway I will find you and say
I am here. I am here waiting for you to
Take my hand and guide me through
Life without sorrow to an enchanting eternity.
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| 1/31/2008 7:07:38 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
wolffdream
Billerica, MA
age: 57
| Hows this:
I see my spirit mirrored in your eyes,
And a thousnd dreams dance as I watch you pass.
I wonder if those eyes truly realize,
Some dreams materialize and are meant to last.
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| 1/31/2008 7:18:44 AM | i need some ideas PLEASE | |
wolffdream
Billerica, MA
age: 57
| or maybe this:
Beauty is a gift, it glows from within,
From the wonderful person you have always been.
My life is enriched by being so near,
A soft voice in a whisper, one I hope you'll hear.
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