 truestlovaeva Macon, GA age: 38
| She knows from the way I look at her when I look at her no confusion she knows that I am hooked on her no shame no using she knows every breath that I breathe it’s not a game inhale exhale through the sushine as well as the rain in prayer continually honestly constantly God knows and God does bless as well as blesses us in spite of life’s obstacles and distractions she knows that I stay ready authentically true satisfaction together we seek the kingdom of heaven and everything else will be added fo sho she knows we know that man makes the money AND money has never and WON’T ever make the man nor woman, material things come and either you keep the bills paid or again fo sho they go or eventually they get old she knows this so we let the rest of the world chase after the wind while we yoke joined in matrimony holy union before GOD SPIRTUAL SO much deeper and oh so much more vast far more beyond conceivable than physical she knows that I am her man on this earth I stand in love yet fully prepared for war if all that I have is GOD THEN ALL THAT I HAVE IS POWER NO NEED TO WONDER never to be put asunder what our father who art in heaven has joined no man can separate she knows from the way that I talk to her she sees time pass and my words manifest to be true even when I make stupid mistakes I will tell her the truth she would know the truth any way see because I know that she knows that she is real with and for me too tis one of the reasons why we first said I do ten years later through so much hell we have been yet we are stronger never wanting to see the end only new beginnings she knows that loving has become easy because that is what we both want to do
That BS in the streets we see straight through it’s called discernment something I’d advise you all to get because life can be kinda chaotic without it she knows that any other woman’s attempt to seduce my body and mind will be fruitless to be blunt useless a waste of her time no matter who she is no matter what she looks like no matter what her sexual skills feel like my lady knows when I touch her foreplay all day I aim to please speaking without even speaking see I’m missing no spots in there from her head all over every where in between all the way down to both of her pinky toes again fo sho delivering stimulation to every nerve ending leading here to her clitoris remembering constantly her G-SPOT ‘s wetness IT'S swelling multiple orgasms moaning even yelling
She knows
I AM
Paying close attention to her labia, minora also majora her vulva’s palpitation the beating of her heart sex as art poetry in motion a true heavenly creation she knows that when she speaks I hear her I listen I learn as I said we are as one under the sun
Under the SON never missing passion for real she knows she can get it without even asking apart together we are still,, she knows that everything about her matters to me now eternally for real
She knows 
J/08CR
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 healthologist Page, AZ age: 60
| And yet they still walk away because there is more to a woman than just sex.
I like your writing though.
Les
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 soulcrazy San Clemente, CA age: 39
| Les you crack me up!
~Cajun~
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 healthologist Page, AZ age: 60
| Cajun,
you know I speak the truth.
I have the experience to back it up.
Les
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 truestlovaeva Macon, GA age: 38
| As long as this writing is and as many topics it touched on all you saw was just sex
hmm that's odd any way thanks for your input heathologist
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 healthologist Page, AZ age: 60
| True,
I do like your writing, However this is what I would suggest so that other people don't come up with the same idea that I did, and just normal editor comments.
1.Get a google toolbar so you can run spellcheck.
2.Consider that the start and finish are what stick with people.
3.How to avoid #2 is to use paragraphs and develop different ideas within your write in different sections (this gives many more mini starts and finishes).
4.Write and rewrite continuously.
5.Keep the beginning and ending paragraphs short and to the point to capture and keep attention of the reader.
Don't let anyone discourage you and steal you dream.
Les
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 truestlovaeva Macon, GA age: 38
| Thanks for the encouragements and tips I really do appreciate them like 24kt.gold again THANX!!! 
[Edited 2/17/2008 4:11:31 PM]
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