| 2/9/2008 6:18:35 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
taylor311
Roswell, GA
age: 21
| I write poems when im upset....and i have never been as sad as i am right now...
is there still love
Everybody is making love
And nobody loves
As they have changed the rationale
Now make it an event of lovemaking
Everybody is plugging the socket
And nobody wants to know if there is current
For all they want is the action
As it fulfills creation
It is no longer love
It is now fulfilling an act
Because everybody is in the act
And how can we call it love?
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| 2/9/2008 6:53:21 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
smilin_bob
Broadway, VA
age: 47
| Taylor,
it is a good poem, but unfortunate that you have to write something as meaningful as that.
I wish you happiness in the future!
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| 2/9/2008 7:02:29 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
bayougirl6969
Marrero, LA
age: 47
| That is a very good poem and i know the feeling myself all too well.
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| 2/9/2008 7:03:36 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
recondevildawg
Spring, TX
age: 33
| What happen,get your heart broke
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| 2/10/2008 7:24:07 AM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
countrydancer32
Elmo, UT
age: 33
| recon, here's your sign..
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| 2/10/2008 7:33:53 AM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
forestrose
Calgary, AB
age: 55
| I'm sorry to read you are suffering.
Your poem says what happened.
In the future, make sure you don't do anything
for the sole purpose of pleasing someone else
i.e. giving in. Set up your own rules and guidelines,
who cares what others are doing or expect.
Keep journalling/writing. It helps the process of
getting clear headed. Good luck to you.
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| 2/10/2008 11:48:14 AM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
superheroscoo
Garden City, KS
age: 24
| Stay strong. Personally, I don't call it loving if its simply meaningless sex. That would fall under the definition of "f*cking."
There is too much "f*cking" in the world and not enough loving.
Oh, Good Poem!
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| 2/10/2008 12:08:14 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
largefetus
Acme, WA
age: 32
| you are my superhero, superhero
BOW  CHICKA WOW WOW
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| 2/18/2008 12:42:32 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
lova_girl
Albany, GA
age: 31
| Nice poem and I am sorry that you are feeling pain if there is anything I can do look me up and we can talk, I am gay but I still have a heart and feel pain like the next so if you need a friend I am here. Good luck to you in your future.
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| 2/18/2008 1:09:38 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
thebestman
Alpharetta, GA
age: 34
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| 2/18/2008 1:21:22 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
thebestman
Alpharetta, GA
age: 34
| i'm going to make this short, simple, and sweet
true Love has no boundaries of who you will meet
true love is often times confused
some even think love involves being abused
the next time you are with someone ask yourself one question
am i being used, and if so, remove yourself without hesitation
you always want to ask yourself, am i in love or lust
don't confuse the physical, because the relation will be a bust
people use the term love very loosely
i say love generates feelings unconditionally
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| 2/18/2008 5:00:06 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
massagepro
Vernon Rockville, CT
age: 49
| Taylor, You are right, it does hurt.
See if there is any way you can learn and grow from this experience.
In time, for time heals it all.
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| 2/18/2008 5:13:44 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
chimike
Chicago, IL
age: 57
| Country, you are too funny....
Very nice poem,some deep feelings there; can only tell you things will get better, other fish in the sea and a bunch of other cliches; but, most of them are true.
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| 2/18/2008 5:28:35 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
canufi6my
Lawrenceville, GA
age: 58
| I found this helps, find someone that's being a real "A hole", and knock the daylights out of 'em, John Wayne style! Brightens my day!
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| 2/18/2008 7:08:33 PM | My HEART HURTS!! | |
coslty8
Uniondale, NY
age: 32
| Yeah true love does exist, you have to first love yourself first not to let anyone use and abuse you..I'm not talking about selfish love where "it's all about me". But a love that says these are my "realistic expectations" and "deal breaker". Once a person really starts to love themselves, they will not give their heart to any guy that comes along, no matter how cute, charming he may appear to be.
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