| 3/9/2008 12:25:45 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
hashcannon
Old Hickory, TN
age: 35
| Ok this is really easy...
Standard Haiku Style applies...
5 syllable line...
7 syllable line...
5 syllable line...
But heres the twist.....your first line ....
(5 syllables) ...must be the last line of
...THE HAIKU POSTING ABOVE YOURS.....
Your beauty abounds..
Shining throughout the heavens..
So bright I need shades...
Peace out and have fun...
 
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| 3/9/2008 12:42:03 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| So bright I need shades..
The Sun cannot contain it..
Your smile makes me laugh..
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| 3/9/2008 8:43:28 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
cottagebithec
Utica, NY
age: 60
| Your beauty abounds..
Shining throughout the heavens..
So bright I need shades...
So bright I need shades..
The Sun cannot contain it..
Your smile makes me laugh..
Your smile makes me laugh
As I giggle before
You and look to your eyes as
Is this correct guys?
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| 3/9/2008 9:13:24 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| Move the you to the second line and drop the as in the third
Your beauty abounds..
Shining throughout the heavens..
So bright I need shades..
So bright I need shades..
The Sun cannot contain it..
Your smile makes me laugh..
Your smile makes me laugh..
As I giggle before You..
and look to your eyes..
and look to your eyes..
the windows of the soul seek..
Permanent fixture..
[Edited 3/9/2008 9:24:29 PM]
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| 3/9/2008 9:31:31 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
cottagebithec
Utica, NY
age: 60
| Your beauty abounds..
Shining throughout the heavens..
So bright I need shades..
So bright I need shades..
The Sun cannot contain it..
Your smile makes me laugh..
Your smile makes me laugh..
As I giggle before You..
and look to your eyes..
and look to your eyes..
the windows of the soul seek..
Permanent fixture..
Permanent fixture
The senses they mixture
As my skin flushes
Better?
[Edited 3/9/2008 9:32:45 PM]
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| 3/9/2008 11:03:08 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| Missing one syllable in the second line.
Your beauty abounds..
Shining throughout the heavens..
So bright I need shades..
So bright I need shades..
The Sun cannot contain it..
Your smile makes me laugh..
Your smile makes me laugh..
As I giggle before You..
and look to your eyes..
and look to your eyes..
the windows of the soul seek..
Permanent fixture..
Permanent fixture
The senses they mixture
As my skin flushes
As my skin flushes..
Blood rises to meet the sun..
Morning wood prevails..
[Edited 3/9/2008 11:13:14 PM]
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| 3/10/2008 7:50:32 AM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
hashcannon
Old Hickory, TN
age: 35
| awesome guys....
you dont need to post all other replies...but you guys def have the right idea
Morning wood prevails..
pushing softly against your
wonderful backside...
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| 3/10/2008 9:22:19 AM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| wonderful backside
pushes up high in the air
doggie style is great
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| 3/10/2008 2:09:43 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
cottagebithec
Utica, NY
age: 60
| dogie style is great
The Beagle won the prize
He is now "the dog"
Can we make the innuendos more sutler?
Just asking here.
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| 3/10/2008 2:12:38 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
hashcannon
Old Hickory, TN
age: 35
| He is now "the dog"
poor boy now has a title
its good being king...
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| 3/10/2008 2:58:10 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| It's good being king
size doesn't matter at all
Chihuahuas now rule
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| 3/10/2008 9:53:46 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
cottagebithec
Utica, NY
age: 60
| Heath,
Got that one turned
around into your
fort-ea!
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| 3/10/2008 10:00:29 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
cottagebithec
Utica, NY
age: 60
| It's good being king
size doesn't matter at all
Chihuahuas now rule
Chihuahuas now rule
The Beagles are out the door
Shorty's in charge now!
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| 3/11/2008 10:28:40 AM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| Shorty's in charge now!
different strokes for different folks
Lanky's on the rise!
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| 3/12/2008 2:04:47 PM | Can You Haiku....???? | |
healthologist
Page, AZ
age: 60
| Lanky's on the rise!
not a clue what I'm doing
sure is fun playing
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