| 3/12/2008 4:53:39 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
devildogg2154
Wheaton, IL
age: 25
| First one writes and starts, the next to post from the first battles what he says and so forth...light it up!
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| 3/12/2008 5:21:37 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
flowergirl62
South Australia
Australia
age: 46
| The green light shone in the distance
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| 3/12/2008 5:42:48 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
gabisanic
Pleasant Hill, CA
age: 51
| reflecting off the horizon in such way
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| 3/12/2008 5:45:38 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
musicman_zzz
Decatur, AL
age: 40
| As to light a burning desire
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| 3/12/2008 5:46:16 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
blondechick37
Industry, PA
age: 37 online now!
| you are pulled in closer
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| 3/12/2008 5:49:28 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
flowergirl62
South Australia
Australia
age: 46
| by the magical shadows all around
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| 3/12/2008 5:50:30 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
gabisanic
Pleasant Hill, CA
age: 51
| and yet, every muscle in your body
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| 3/12/2008 7:06:21 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
brendaj
Savannah, GA
age: 44
| aches with desire, and wants so badly.......
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| 3/12/2008 7:22:15 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
belladreams
Binghamton, NY
age: 38
| this poem does not rhyme at all.
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| 3/12/2008 7:58:48 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
devildogg2154
Wheaton, IL
age: 25
| Ok you all suck..except the last post where she said it does not rhyme!!...I said poems.../rhymes...that's what its about...need I show example??
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| 3/12/2008 10:25:52 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
twohawks
Bothell, WA
age: 69
| I think we can consider this "prose". As such it doesn't need to rhyme.
[Edited 3/12/2008 10:26:29 AM]
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| 3/12/2008 10:33:02 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
aquamoon259
Raritan, NJ
age: 49
| Come on devildogg....give us a sample....
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| 3/12/2008 10:37:53 AM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
familyguy58103
Los Angeles, CA
age: 88
| Wow, I lost 5 I.Q. points just reading this thread- and I don't have any to spare....
[Edited 3/12/2008 10:38:12 AM]
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| 3/12/2008 12:33:33 PM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
whatsupinya
Bullhead City, AZ
age: 47
| Ok, I'll start something EASY for you guys
Roses are red:
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| 3/12/2008 12:39:30 PM | Poetic lyricism see what ya got | |
jasmom
Quincy, IL
age: 35
| my dogs name is Fred
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