|6/5/2014 3:04:14 PM||Interested in what others percieve of my profile.|| |
27, joined Dec. 2013
|I am interested in knowing what other people think of my profile. I think it's good but there is always room for improvements and what better way for improvements then seeing what other people think? It could probably use one or two extra pictures but I believe my profile picture is good at least. So what do you see as possible ideas for my description? Would love the feedback.|
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|6/5/2014 3:41:41 PM||Interested in what others percieve of my profile.|| |
Fort Garland, CO
50, joined Oct. 2013
|Didn't read the whole thing cuz well honestly big blocks of text hardly ever get read, try splitting it up into some paragraphs to encourage people to read it
I'd also suggest trying to use something a little more catchy that opening it up with your just a normal guy.
|6/5/2014 4:33:03 PM||Interested in what others percieve of my profile.|| |
42, joined Apr. 2010
|I agree. I refuse to read a wall of words.
Break it up into logical paragraphs and the separate those paragraphs with a blank space, as I've done here. Post on this thread to let us know when you've done it so we can take a look.
|6/5/2014 4:36:50 PM||Interested in what others percieve of my profile.|| |
43, joined Aug. 2013
|I made to the part ..
Where you state you like Betty Crocker...
....and then fell to sleep on my toilet..
|6/5/2014 4:46:40 PM||Interested in what others percieve of my profile.|| |
Fort Lauderdale, FL
50, joined May. 2014
|okay . after reading your profile i can point out one thing . you can expect you might get responses from all kinds of women . tall short , fat , old , ugly , ect. if thats okay with you then you have no problem . but if there is some characteristic that you would like to avoid you might want to put it in there .|
|6/5/2014 9:16:24 PM||Interested in what others percieve of my profile.|| |
Maple Ridge, BC
55, joined Aug. 2010
|Your autocorrect doesn't know how to spell 'definitely'.
Smile with teeth, unless you have really gnarly teeth. Then fix them.
Paragraphs. For the love of Canadian Back Bacon, paragraphs.
Lose the 'not picky' part. That's not as flattering or complimentary as you think. "Hey, I'm not picky, so I'd date you." See?
You sound really wishy washy with the probablys. Lose those and just state what you are, what you enjoy doing, what kind of humour you enjoy, and what you're really looking for here.