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6/5/2014 3:04:14 PMInterested in what others percieve of my profile. 

ejamastic009
Nunda, NY
27, joined Dec. 2013


I am interested in knowing what other people think of my profile. I think it's good but there is always room for improvements and what better way for improvements then seeing what other people think? It could probably use one or two extra pictures but I believe my profile picture is good at least. So what do you see as possible ideas for my description? Would love the feedback.

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6/5/2014 3:41:41 PMInterested in what others percieve of my profile. 

righttwix
Over 1,000 Posts (1,559)
Fort Garland, CO
50, joined Oct. 2013


Didn't read the whole thing cuz well honestly big blocks of text hardly ever get read, try splitting it up into some paragraphs to encourage people to read it

I'd also suggest trying to use something a little more catchy that opening it up with your just a normal guy.

6/5/2014 4:33:03 PMInterested in what others percieve of my profile. 

terbear1234
Over 4,000 Posts! (5,059)
Bremerton, WA
42, joined Apr. 2010


I agree. I refuse to read a wall of words.

Break it up into logical paragraphs and the separate those paragraphs with a blank space, as I've done here. Post on this thread to let us know when you've done it so we can take a look.

6/5/2014 4:36:50 PMInterested in what others percieve of my profile. 

indecisive_4
Over 2,000 Posts (2,264)
Bonaire, GA
43, joined Aug. 2013


I made to the part ..

Where you state you like Betty Crocker...


....and then fell to sleep on my toilet..

6/5/2014 4:46:40 PMInterested in what others percieve of my profile. 

__faithful1__
Fort Lauderdale, FL
50, joined May. 2014


okay . after reading your profile i can point out one thing . you can expect you might get responses from all kinds of women . tall short , fat , old , ugly , ect. if thats okay with you then you have no problem . but if there is some characteristic that you would like to avoid you might want to put it in there .

6/5/2014 9:16:24 PMInterested in what others percieve of my profile. 
forums_only
Over 10,000 Posts!!! (16,593)
Maple Ridge, BC
55, joined Aug. 2010


Your autocorrect doesn't know how to spell 'definitely'.

Smile with teeth, unless you have really gnarly teeth. Then fix them.

Paragraphs. For the love of Canadian Back Bacon, paragraphs.

Lose the 'not picky' part. That's not as flattering or complimentary as you think. "Hey, I'm not picky, so I'd date you." See?

You sound really wishy washy with the probablys. Lose those and just state what you are, what you enjoy doing, what kind of humour you enjoy, and what you're really looking for here.